week three to four - development of spreads and changes

After  last weeks creation and making of my destination spreads, through to critique which I learnt what is working what is not, I have decided to completely re model my style to fit the graphical system that I know works. While I have previously stated I have found it hard to replicate what I had done to one destination to the others, after discussions with Lee we have decided that making a complete replica of the original composition for the other destinations was the best way forward. This way I can then work from there, altering and adding to result in three compositions that work together but are all separate to their own destinations.  

First attempt: 

Moving forward I will continue to make the rest of the destination spreads and try and convey this style/graphic system throughout the whole brochure.